I got Tagged - Whisper

So, Lyza Lynne started this with me, and I intend to finsih it! Here's the rules:

The rules:
1. Make a change in the paragraph below. It can be as little as a single word or almost every word, so long as we can still recognize the paragraph you received from the person who tagged you, not the original paragraph.

My paragraph:

When she came to the tracks, they were all wrong. She usually prided herself on her ability to hunt. She was practically addicted to it. But these tracks made no sense to Desiree. This confusion led to anger. And as that anger washed over her, she pittied her quarry. She would find him. Hunt him down like a dog. And when she found the fool, she would finish this business.


2. Next, tag three people to make a change in the paragraph you wrote, and link to them.

3. Also link to the person who tagged you (me) so the chain will not be broken.

4. Go to the original paragraph at Alice's Restaurant and let her know you did it so she can link back to you. For extra credit, head over to AliceAudrey.wordpress.com around June 9th for the contest based on this meme. You could win a $20 gift certificate!

I am sending to: Shag, H F, and EDP

Here is Lyza's original paragrph for reference:

She came from the wrong side of the tracks, her pride in one hand and his addiction in the other. Her name was Desiree and she'd never called upon him before when she needed the business. He'd said he pitied her, just like he had so many other girls before her. She cursed him, and then she got down to business. “Like a dog returns to it’s vomit, so a fool repeats his foolishness.” - Proverbs 26:11